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Invisible man
Contributed by
Arius-Inues
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:46:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Do you see right threw me,
As if I do not exist,
Sometimes I wish I were,
An Invisible person,
For then no words of hurt,
Would be thrown my way,
No tears would I cry,
Criticizism would not be found,
My voice shall not be heard,
One morn’ you will wake,
To find me gone,
To spread my wings and soar,
Up high with the birds,
Or to flow with,
The mighty rushing waters,
Is my deepest desire,
Will you see me then,
In the paper or the news,
Or will you start to,
Shall you remember me,
As you read my obituary,
And feel that you could,
Change my fortune,
And my fate!
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Arius-Inues
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2004-02-19 20:46:23]
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Re: Invisible man
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:02:06 PM AEST
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| i like your poem its very emotional and intreging makes me see through ur eyes..........your a good writer |
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Re: Invisible man
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by Merry on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 01:39:13 PM AEST
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an emotional write, sometimes we just fall in love with the wrong person - leaves one feeling invisible and unhappy. i really liked this poem - have been a bit invisible myself lately. lol
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Re: Invisible man
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:30:53 PM AEST
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Very emotional write.... I love your work..
(May I make a suggestion, tho...you should try doing a spell check on your poems...or clicking on the yes button for one of the moderators to edit it for you)
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