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lil packets
Contributed by
peppermint
on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:49:32 PM in AEST
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trace that fear that we all know
mudane and face down
face drop antiseptic
fear the clean, pass to end
spearingly cracked for your passage
clear your eyes and pass your existance to them
redeam to yourself later
dont forget to remeber
self centered *****
we're all like ourselfs
love your breath, it comes in little packets
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peppermint
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2004-02-19 19:49:32]
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Re: lil packets
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:54:37 AM AEST
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| short and sweet, it said alot in so few words. good play with words, poetic and meaningful. A+ |
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Re: lil packets
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:49:59 PM AEST
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| wow...amazing... |
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