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Absorbing all to cry
Contributed by
peppermint
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:47:40 PM in AEST
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Screaming silent hairs
Lick, ecoli
Tastes like sugar
Whisper steps of distance to falls of feet
Walk from puddle to puddle
All dried up
Absorbing all to cry
Don't cry
When they drink that change
Feed them tears of always
Want it to be perfect like difference
Tastes like syrup
Melts like rotting meat
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Re: Absorbing all to cry
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:54:16 PM AEST
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dark and dreary, like a nine inch nails music video!! sweetness! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Absorbing all to cry
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:59:38 AM AEST
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| another really strong one.... you are a very creative writter, i enjoy your style. |
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Re: Absorbing all to cry
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by Saitou-sama on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:49:08 PM AEST
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| Score. Rock on. |
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