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smoke always rises
Contributed by
peppermint
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:45:38 PM in AEST
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Smoke always rises
Sediment of your breath
Lucid in the fake
Dark red, low heat of purple
Spiral points, bleeding
Glass always cuts
Take it pictured
Corner yourself
Fall through those shadows
Believe what you can't, don't strafe
Entice me, like you
Veins always cry
Breath hope
Die slowly
Feel it all for the last time
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2004-02-19 19:45:38]
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Re: smoke always rises
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:18:34 PM AEST
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After reading your latest three, I take it you don't like smokers.
Well done, you stnad for what you beleive in. |
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Re: smoke always rises
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:20:13 PM AEST
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| That's weird. I did. Very much! |
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