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Snow Song
Contributed by
ksprincess42004
on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:23:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I stand
Silent and still
In a storm of white
Listening to the sound
Of each flake hitting the earth
The sound becomes a song
A lullaby for the winter
Singing the day into night
And the sad into happy
However this song
Is only for my ears tonight
Telling me of comfort not yet felt
Lessons not yet learned
I concentrate
On a single note
A single snowflake
I watch it's decent
Into the silent melody
The snow song moves through me
And the coldness of the night air disappears
Along with the world
All that remains--
Snow and myself
Until lights appear
And my trance breaks
its time to go inside
The song has ended
Copyright ©
ksprincess42004
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2004-02-19 19:23:43]
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Re: Snow Song
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:31:35 PM AEST
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| This is entrancing. I felt the stillness you evoked through these words, and saw the beauty of the picture you painted with them. A really lovely poem. |
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Re: Snow Song
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by Remy on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:52:01 PM AEST
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*sniffle* pretty... *pets the snow* pretty... SNOWFIGHT!! lol, this was SO serene, i like!!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Snow Song
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by Lainda on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:31:56 PM AEST
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| It was very well-written and a awesome poem. There was just one word that didn't fit, "hitting." |
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