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Meaning?
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:18:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I sit here staring out at night
Glaring far so out of sight
I Sit and wonder why were here
And why the meanings so unclear
A thousand tears could be cried
To in the end just fall and die
Happiness maybe that could be true
But then why do we sometimes feel so blue?
Make a child prosper and grow
For then they say you will know
So what of women, who cannot mother
Or men that can not even bother?
Maybe religion is the key
To find out why we must be
But so many, which to chose
And if its wrong, then what you lose?
So is it winning and losing alike
Maybe thats the note we strike
To win or lose thats the way
But then isnt it the fact you did play?
So whats the meaning, why are we here
Who would have thought itd be unclear
Its sending me mad, im going insane
Because no matter the answer, a question remains
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Re: Meaning?
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by arden on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:25:03 PM AEST
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Interesting, I really like this. Good work Keep em coming.
Arden
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Re: Meaning?
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by ksprincess42004 on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:27:04 PM AEST
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| This is really a thought-provoking write. Good job! |
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Re: Meaning?
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:52:46 PM AEST
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I like dthis poem maam. A basic question ever seeking heart asks. Very well written...Russ
p.s.-I know why we're here but you must find that answer alone. smiles-Godbless |
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Re: Meaning?
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:56:28 PM AEST
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| questions bloom like the flowers, keep watering the garden, write on, this ones great:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Meaning?
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 10:08:11 PM AEST
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| Your thoughts put in words so clearly. Makes one ponder about these things. Good write. |
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Re: Meaning?
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by Empty_Soul on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:13:51 PM AEST
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| Tis a clever wee po-e-um lol. very good poem dude, as usual, i hate u for that lol, i cant write for ***** atm. |
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