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Losing You Now
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:32:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm trying to be there with you,
You're in the hospital 60 miles away.
I'm trying to find a way to you,
But it's not an easy thing to do.
Seems nobody's going that way,
I'm going against the flow.
I know you may not make it,
So right now I just want you to know
That I love you,
And right now I feel like I'm losing you.
Please, baby, don't let go.
Live for me, or let me exchange my life
For yours.
You know if I could I will.
I'd die for you to live,
But without you to be there for me,
I don't know if I could.
Please don't let me lose you,
Don't die on me.
Now I feel like I'm losing you.
I'm so scared that I'm losing you.
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Re: Losing You Now
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by kailadragon on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:38:12 PM AEST
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| I wish there was something I could do Solmyr......but I can't |
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Re: Losing You Now
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by SAT on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:18:41 PM AEST
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| im so sorry. i hope that she does make it, because i dont know what we'd all do without your touching words. if i can help in any way, let me know. ill say a prayer for the both of you. again, sorry. :'( |
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Re: Losing You Now
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by Asatru on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:31:50 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem... and I'm really sorry about your girlfriend, hopes she makes it. |
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Re: Losing You Now
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:38:26 PM AEST
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| Are you in Missouri maybe I can give you a ride to the hospital? Let me know, oh I hope she is ok. bye Wes... |
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Re: Losing You Now
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:03:21 AM AEST
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| The is well captured in poetic form.. you are good at this, Solmy... hei whenever u get to my page comment and vote my poems |
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Re: Losing You Now
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by desire on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:04:10 PM AEST
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| this is a very deep heartfelt poem, and i pray all is well with her..love is a powerful thing and it may be just the thing that pulls her through...you are not without prayers...slr |
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