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Maiden Fair and True
Contributed by
PassionatelyRomantic
on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:27:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In a dream she came to me,
a maiden fair and true,
she beckoned and pleed to thee,
that I would never say adieu.
I took her hand in mine,
and swore my life to thee,
that my life may be thine,
was my heart's own decree.
Her beauty was but an eclipse,
masking the beauty of the moon,
the red rose was shamed by her lips,
as she sung her pleasant tune.
The sparkling stars present,
and sensational night skies,
seemed so insignificant,
to the light in her eyes.
But soon darkness began to fade,
as light began to dawn,
and sure enough my oath betrayed,
my lover's heart was gone!
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Re: Maiden Fair and True
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by kailadragon on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:30:43 PM AEST
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| I like this poem.....and the twist at the end. it's neat.... |
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Re: Maiden Fair and True
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:31:35 PM AEST
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very nicely done....great flow and rhyme.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Maiden Fair and True
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by gratefuldawg77 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:40:52 AM AEST
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Nice wordplay:
her beauty... an eclipse=moon
sparkling stars= light in her eyes....etc
BEAUTIFUL |
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Re: Maiden Fair and True
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:02:40 AM AEST
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Excellent! I love this sort of poetry.
Keep it up.
Andrew |
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