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I Don't ..........Anymore
Contributed by
baronhawk
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 01:55:51 PM in AEST
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I don't listen to songs anymore
lest I remember what they were
no more melodies nor tunes nor lyrics
lest they bring back tales of yesterday's antics
I don't walk by the beach anymore
lest my feet be washed by the waves
no more prints in the sand will I leave
lest troublesome knots in life will I weave
I don't dare to dream anymore
lest I lose sight of reality's shore
no more thoughts nor hope nor ambition
lest I be lost in uncharted seas
I don't care to dance anymore
lest my feet steps on any toes
no more twists nor twirls nor pirouttes
lest I slip and fall on my face really flat
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Re: I Don't ..........Anymore
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by Remy on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:17:03 PM AEST
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This is saddening, one must do life's little dance!! but hey - like that song, "if you don't then don't".
~Remy~ |
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Re: I Don't ..........Anymore
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by Kie on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:31:22 PM AEST
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| Filled with melancholy and it just called to me. Your words just flowed so beautifully that even the saddest write is heavenly. Kie |
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Re: I Don't ..........Anymore
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:18:25 AM AEST
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Boy, how life can make us feel that way. But I think its the part of us poets to resist that feeling. To refuse to grow more worldly wise...
Keep it up! This is very good. |
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