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A True Beauty
Contributed by
starlight_dancer
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:15:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A beautiful blossoming tree,
Opening out, for people too see,
Outwardly growing, someone really does care,
With him, everything is a pleasure share.
Talking together for hours, each day and each night
To keep holding onto him, anything I will fight.
Love growing stronger deep in my heart,
Nothing will ever keep us apart
Adoring his every living breath,
I love him always, I love him to death.
A bright shining light, deep inside,
So happy with him, a love I can’t hide
A beauty both within and without,
When I’m with him, there’s nothing to doubt.
I’ve found my soul mate, my one true love.
Thank you for guiding me, oh God above.
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starlight_dancer
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2004-02-19 03:15:38]
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Re: A True Beauty
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:12:49 AM AEST
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Sarah...I haven't words enough to express how much this means to me. I will just say that this is the greatest gift you could ever have given me...well, aside from loving me and being you! This will burn within my heart for all time, and i'll hold sacred and cherish your words.
Thank you, Sarah..I love you.
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: A True Beauty
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:41:51 AM AEST
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| Awwww, this brings me to tears ... there is such beauty in expressing your love in a poem ... I'm so happy for you both ... beautifully written ... Jan |
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Re: A True Beauty
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:29:37 AM AEST
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| Aww.. you guys are both so sweet. It awesome to see love potrayed in poetry. |
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Re: A True Beauty
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by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:51:01 PM AEST
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| Awww this made me cry as well. Your beautiful words of dedication, love and commitment were like music to my ears. May you two always cherish each other and may your love grow and blossom in all ways. Loved this one. Kie |
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Re: A True Beauty
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 08:03:28 PM AEST
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Like the falling blossom petal, it falls on the most sacred grounds, finding the place to live and cherish its days in the place it feels most loved, i see from the emotion in the poems by yourself and dan you have both found your sacred grounds, and i am happy for you both more than words can ever express, me and dan have become very good friends through poetry, i am mesmorised by his infinate talent and i am also mesmorised by yours, truely you both have something i know you will cherish forever, all the best to you both.
Luke |
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Re: A True Beauty
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:40:41 AM AEST
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Truly beautiful poem. Thanks.
Andrew |
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Re: A True Beauty
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:45:54 PM AEST
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| starlight, isnt it a wonderful feeling? i wish you the best of luck. beautiful write through anf through. |
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