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i give and give
Contributed by
baby
on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:24:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ive heard the sayin b 4
wats better a lie that draws a smile or the truth that draws a tear
and i've see how thats tru
i've learn the truth n cried
i hide n hold my pillow tight 4 theres no one to hug no one to show my pain from a boy that i love n he loved me back so i thought/ if u love me then u wouldnt kiss anotha /
but u cant change the past /cant escape the pain that u have done to my heart the pain will never escape or will it be like every other thing/ i forgave i forgive n forgive but im the one doin all the forgiving i do n give without reciving, reciving love
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Re: i give and give
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:29:42 AM AEST (User
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This is a good write...found it a tiny bit hard to follow....but once i got it, its a wonderful write! |
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Re: i give and give
(User Rating: 1 ) by nirupam on
Saturday, 22nd October 2011 @ 05:55:58 AM AEST (User
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Hey baby, a very sincerely written poem..hope you will soon look up to love... |
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