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I never lied to you I didn't promise u anything (loved)

Contributed by Remi on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:12:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I never lied to you I didn't promise u anything(loved)

Jan 24, 04
6:38 pm

You said come on open up, open up to me I said no u want like my world, my mind, it to powerful, to much confusein for u to understand it u thought u were a big boy well this the big league sorry to disappoint u

I open up but u didn't like what came out or what u saw I let my wall down gave u the key to the box and when the pain, and the darkness, hated came flyin out u couldn't handle so u couldn't respect my feelin or understand why I say the things I say u took me for granted

well I never lied to you I didn't promise love

You said don't trust u that does not help your case, why do u insist on pushin so hard why couldn't u be patiant why couldn't u understand

2 weeks and I'm ready to run from u, hide from u and when u did stop pushin I became confused and thought u didn't care anymore

You shouldn't have stop now u might just lost your dance for good I don't just give my key to anyone I just don't fall for anybody my feelin are delicate and soft I can be a dove

I thought u would understand
I gave u hints to help
I gave u hints to keepin pushin
u stop and with that your dance as well

I never lied to you
I didn't promise u understandin
I didn't promise u closeness
I didn't promise u sanity

I never lied to you
I didn't promise u a easy road

I never lied
I never

Copyright © Remi ... [ 2004-02-19 00:12:52]
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Re: I never lied to you I didn't promise u anything (loved) (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:31:48 AM AEST
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This is a good write i really enjoy your work! good job!

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