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Lonely Pine
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 11:08:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The days have left me alone
like a single pine rooted atop a barren hill
I am shaking in this wind
damned to be in this skin though
toiling to crack a smile
screaming to closed ears
where are you now?
you rid yourself of this earth
to travel the heavens
and I am still that lone pine thats rooted atop a hill,
shaking in the wind
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2004-02-18 23:08:38]
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Re: Lonely Pine
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by waos on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 11:31:17 PM AEST
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| i like your stuff. i read that other one you posted too. keep writing. it's good. |
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Re: Lonely Pine
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by Kie on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:27:22 PM AEST
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| This was so sad it just called called to me. From the title to the ending a perfect poem. Kie |
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Re: Lonely Pine
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:45:38 PM AEST
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A man's struggle within, great thoughts, loved it.
Twinkletoes! |
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