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Pain Is Forever
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 10:35:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pain is forever,
It has a sinister hold on your soul
Binding itself to you, it holds you to suffering
Not wanting to let go,
It keeps to you like a lost child
Pain,
It comes in different ways
The first wound is the grave,
Abysmal in the flowing blood
The blood floods you, like liquid hot fear
Forever,
This forever seems eternally long
You want to break away from the eye of time
Disappear into welcoming darkness
Pain is forever, holding on to you
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-02-18 22:35:52]
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Re: Pain Is Forever
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by Esther on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 11:20:43 PM AEST
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awsome-i loved the way you wrote pain and forever together and then seperate-and then binded them together again-great write!
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Re: Pain Is Forever
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by waos on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 11:33:07 PM AEST
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| ya, like was said...good stuff there. |
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Re: Pain Is Forever
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:31:07 AM AEST
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| Great poem, I agree to every word. |
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Re: Pain Is Forever
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 12:20:20 PM AEST
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A very true statement....good word choice.....
you captured the personification of pain very well.
Thank you for sharing....
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