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Arelis
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 10:35:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The scarlet ribbon lies waving in the girl’s hand
She walks down the long, calling roads of Foxglove
The swirling gray clouds cover the shining sun
I wish she said, for a sunny day
Next year at this time, I shall be walking strong
My name is Arelis, daughter of Zechariah
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-02-18 22:35:14]
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Re: Arelis
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by Remy on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:19:01 PM AEST
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Curious, haven't heard of that prompt before... but this is sweet, and cute! I love it!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Arelis
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:46:35 AM AEST
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This poem feels very non-modern. I like it. Keep writing.
Andrew |
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Re: Arelis
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 04:31:05 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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