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~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
Contributed by
PumpkinPie
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 07:56:25 PM in AEST
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I love the way your triangle nose moves up and down
The way you hold your head up high,as if you were widely renown
The way your chubby body bounces up the stairs
The way you lick my hand to show me that you care
I love the way you thump your foot to warn me of danger
The way you investigate a snowflake-it could be a monster
I love the way you jump in without a care in autumn's leaves
And the way you tease me by hiding in a rose bush full of bees
We've been faithful to eachother for now 2 years
You greeted me with a leap and lick-you were different from all your peers
I thought I'd show you to the world today,Bundles' legacy I decided to impart
And to say thank you for all that you've done,for creating such joy in my heart.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Copyright ©
PumpkinPie
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 08:34:25 PM AEST
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| aww very cute bunny and good poem! |
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 08:44:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful furbaby you have there, what a sweetie! hugs and love nessa |
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:30:48 PM AEST
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lol..that was really cute...
well done
Larry |
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:57:36 PM AEST
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Hi pumpkin pie !! What's up?? Are you most beutiful than your bunny or your poem. In that case your so divine, Holy child.
You wrote a beautiful poem dear and your bundles are so cute
Unknow fan |
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 11:44:19 PM AEST
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Hi Pumpkin Pie...great post...lovely pic...Glad you got it up..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:37:05 PM AEST
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HOW CUTE IS THAT BUNNY!!!!!! - I think you have a very sweet bundle of joy there!
Regarding the poem:
I thought the second stanza really shined out with lines like; 'I love the way you jump in without a care in autumn's leaves' and 'And the way you tease me by hiding in a rose bush full of bees' I just thought these lines really showed the wildness of Bundles and also the brilliant observational ability you have as a writer.
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by pixie on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 11:29:04 AM AEST
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awww this is so cute, awww the pciture is adorable,
pixie xx |
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by Karazoul on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:51:14 PM AEST
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good idea to write a poem about your animal !
(I aldreadry have written one for my dog but mine wasn't as good as yours)
(Very good text you're a real good poet)
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:33:00 PM AEST
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Awwww so cute.
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:27:59 PM AEST
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| Awww omg the things you said about the snowflakes, thumping his foot, licks on the hand...Reminds me sooo much of my boy!! This is such a sweet write, and he is adorable...Wanna know something funny? My rabbit looked just like Bundles (colouring) except he was bigger and one ear half flopped...lol Thank you for pointing me to this lovely write.....Scorp. |
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Re: ~*~Ode To Bundles~*~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:24:18 AM AEST
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| Now that is a very very cute poem. Oh, and Bundles is cute too :) |
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