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My mind and My soul
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 07:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My mind is like a civil war.
Two sides fight for control.
High walls block each side out
One side is all bleak and gray
Ugly shapes fight on this side
This is the pain, the hurt, and the frustration
The other side is all bright and sunny
This is the wonderful memories the smiles and caring feelings
This civil war will continue
Till the end of my time
No winner will ever be declared
For in war there a winner
My soul is like a television set, cold and still when not in use.
When it is turned on a crazed channel surfer takes over the control.
A preview outlines its contents
A cartoon shows the kid in me – a part I am trying to hold on to dearly.
Science fiction gives me an escape from reality.
A place to reduce my anger and laugh comes form comedy
The news holds all my experiences
The snowy channel is all my confusion
My soul is a TV
With a channel surfer in control
Copyright ©
lil_angel
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2004-02-18 19:51:14]
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Re: My mind and My soul
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 08:39:43 PM AEST
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Hi lil_angel
That was a nice poem, I think we all feel that way sometimes...But hold on to your childhood and memories,that's what marks you life and makes you who you are :someone special even through the war «going on inside.
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Re: My mind and My soul
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 11:42:32 PM AEST
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Loved this...great analogy!!
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Re: My mind and My soul
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by Remi on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:50:34 AM AEST
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| good write i like the anagoly |
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Re: My mind and My soul
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by venkat on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 01:07:43 AM AEST
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| Oh..Good description..lovely write. venkat |
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Re: My mind and My soul
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:19:49 AM AEST
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I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN! LIFE IS ONE CRAZY THING AFTER ANOTHER!! GOOD POEM!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: My mind and My soul
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:45:36 PM AEST
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| Great write. Very descriptive. I loved it. You did a great job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: My mind and My soul
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:49:00 PM AEST
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| great write. i have a poem, warring peace, about my mind fighting a civil war. the right side verse the left side =] i thought the soul part of this poem was very original. |
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