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have a nice life
Contributed by
antares
on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:51:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Have a nice life-
one of us should.
i will take the misery,
i offer you the good.
Leave me now-
So in peace i may begin,
the unraveling of my threads.
The beginning of my end.
To you i am a burden,
while your the essence of my being.
If only one may be happy,
Its you who deserves to be.
If only i could hate you!
I would leave the pain and flee.
But im cursed with a thing called love,
so the torment is stuck with me.
Take this as my final gift-
your free of me for eternity.
i promise to fade from existence,
Living only as bittersweet memory.
Copyright ©
antares
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2004-02-18 18:51:47]
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Re: have a nice life
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:02:25 PM AEST
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| I've been there. I am there. This was an excellent poem and I certainly can relate. Well done!! Kie |
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Re: have a nice life
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:26:57 PM AEST
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| i think this is the best so far, but then, ive been there too aint i? this is a great poem. thankyou for sharing this, luv phil xxx |
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Re: have a nice life
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:23:05 PM AEST
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| this poem is beautiful, i am currently breathing on the same plain of existence as yourself, hugs n' love nessa |
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