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A dying world
Contributed by
Dizza_13
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:59:55 AM in AEST
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Look at the modern age in time
A world full of violence hate and crime
Very few people have kindness left in their heart
And natural beauty is falling apart
True love exists on but only a thread
And animal species are just dropping dead
What is the cause of this you might ask
Well it’s because of us and our actions
that this world is down
we have destroyed and ruined our beautiful land
and now we seek to travel away to another place
so we can do as we do here and today
Well we don’t deserve it after the way we have been
After all now great things are unseen
And what right do we have to destroy a new world
We should save what we have not leave it to rot
Many years ago before my time
Our people were happy and caring and kind
But alas that day is not now we could bring it back
But no one can even remember how
There are people I know that still are nice and real kind
But a still that’s not good enough because very can
It’s just they all think it’s easier and so don’t even try
I used to walk down to a nearby park
but they smashed it down and up came a car park
If we want to survive we have to all pitch in
To help those in need and to help those who are down
To walk around smiling and not shown a frown
The kindness in people is still in their hearts
It just need some care show it can show it
This world is not lost it is still here
And I will not rest until you all can hear
The sound of birds and trees in the wind
For we all have a calling in life
And mine is to save us and help us unite
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
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2004-02-18 01:59:55]
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Re: A dying world
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 02:04:53 AM AEST
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| at last somone who sees it the same way i do. |
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Re: A dying world
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by slayer_015 on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 02:05:38 AM AEST
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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: A dying world
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 03:12:16 AM AEST
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thx for the support. I've always thought about this sorta thing but never had a way to express it, now i do. It's really is the popel that have read the poems that help me.
Keep thoses comments comin good or bad!!! |
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Re: A dying world
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 04:21:49 AM AEST
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Powerfull!
luv, huggs,
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Re: A dying world
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 04:35:17 AM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! This poem was magnificent, I must say....i throw roses at your feet this very day!
Powerful, and truthful til the end.....I hope everyone listens again and again.
Our creator is not going to stand still and let us ruin man's home......he will soon interevene before he leaves us alone.
This was a great write....you are a very intelligent, and thinking person.
thank you for sharing with us......with you I agree wholeheartedly
consue
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Re: A dying world
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:09:09 AM AEST
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great poem!
i just wish more people would post up more of these kind of poems, and realise the great destruction being caused.
your talent is greatly loved!
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