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Fallen
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:32:08 AM in AEST
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Each cut is
more than I can take.
I bleed from deep inside.
Won't this life
just please leave me.
I can't find my
way back home.
The darkness looks
hungrily at me now.
We both know that
I'm fading fast.
Im laying here
screaming at last.
You wouldn't help
you walked away
now I'm dying.
Hold my hand
while I fade away.
It's too late now.
I swore I'd die
so there I went.
Jumped from the
tallest building
I'll fall to my death.
So symbolic as
I've fallen from you.
So now I'll die
as I swore I would
always kept
my promises...
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
... [
2004-02-18 01:32:08]
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Re: Fallen
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 04:56:09 AM AEST
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Oh cobalt....you sound so tortured all through
I wish I could make you happier.....if I could you know I would!
Good poem.........but you know me......I like the happy ones.
Warm love,
consue |
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Re: Fallen
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 10:26:28 AM AEST
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| This was very sad. Sometimes we all fall emotionally. Keep in mind that no one knows what lies around the next bend and it may be all that you have never had. Hang in there, it has to get better and I hope it will for you...A poem from your heart which is always the best... Kie |
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Re: Fallen
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by Avis_Nigra on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 07:20:23 PM AEST
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| more. I want more. Those are strong. |
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Re: Fallen
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:35:21 AM AEST
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Really...you have this dark write stuff down pat Jeff. Outstanding work!
Larry
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