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Broken Ropes
Contributed by
fldadn1
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:26:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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on a line
that has broke
hangs a hope
how long will it last
how long can he hold
with a thought
he has had
all the reasons
hes been sad
comes back again
and it sticks
got damn it sticks
why does he care
why dont he let go
of the rope
and just die
and kill all hope
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2004-02-18 01:26:35]
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Re: Broken Ropes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:40:12 AM AEST
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| I remember those days, you capture them well. |
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Re: Broken Ropes
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 11:53:13 AM AEST
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| An interesting perspective. Excellent write. Kie |
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