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Last Resort (Do or Die)
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 12:41:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've hit my knees
and my head falls
to my hands as tears
stream down my face.
I'm dying inside.
Only one option remains.
Releasing all emotions
or die on my knees.
Even if my hatred
consumes me I know
I can't afford to fail.
It's now or never.
It's do or die.
I let loose a scream
the pain unbearable...
The fire rushes back
insanely consuming me.
Raging behind my eyes.
Too much to handle.
Everything was burried
I was numb inside.
Hatred, anger, sorrow,
love, compassion, and lust
come flooding back
raging over me.
My spirit reborn
screaming in birth.
Struggling for control.
Can't fail myself
everyone else has.
Must gain control...
This was my last resort...
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-02-18 00:41:19]
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Re: Last Resort (Do or Die)
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 12:51:54 AM AEST
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*gasp* ow.. my chest hurts...
that was mad... i know so much what you mean dude....
ow.
you put a lot of emotion into such a short piece too.
wow. good job
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Re: Last Resort (Do or Die)
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 10:36:23 AM AEST
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| There is a feeling of madness and desperation to this poem and I believe alot of people will relate. It hurts to allow yourself to feel, it is very painful when emotions that have been suppressed are allowed to awaken. But to really live and function and maybe find completion you have to feel. This one hit me hard and screamed out to me. Kie |
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Re: Last Resort (Do or Die)
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:10:24 PM AEST
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dude I don't know if this was yer best since you've written so many that were good, but it definitely ranks right up there. I know i haven't said as much, but I loved it. I could almost feel the pain which u so eloquently expressed and I've been there so many times its scary. Keep up the writing dude u inspire me.
Bobo (Joel) |
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