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Destination Undefined
Contributed by
echo44
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:16:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With just one look in your eyes, I become weak
My heart does three sixty's and I can't speak
You suffocate me with every word that you say
I could just die in your arms and it would be ok
The stars up in the sky spells out your name
When you smile my heart goes completely insane
These cold November nights with you by my side
Nothing that I fear, joy is what I cry
Happiness is what I feel when I'm with you
Even when it rains, my skies are still blue
You're heaven's sent, fell from the sky
A real true angel, an angel in my eyes
When I close my eyes, you're all that I see
When I lay down to dream, you're all that I dream
When I wake up in the morning, you're the first thing on my mind
I'm so gald that I found you, I love you, forever be mine.
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2004-02-17 19:16:18]
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Re: Destination Undefined
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:22:49 PM AEST
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| Ahhh yes love is so sweet, and I do believe you have it bad. Its one of the best feelings in the whole world. You describe it well in your poem keep them coming. Read a couple of mine will you. Regards Wes... |
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Re: Destination Undefined
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:45:31 PM AEST
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nothing better than these feeling of love that you so greatly expressed in this lovely poetic poem.
michelle |
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Re: Destination Undefined
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:02:23 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem. i luv it. makes me remeber that i am still single and in need of love. :_( oh well. great rite. |
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