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SEVENTEEN
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 05:32:51 PM in AEST
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Today is a special time it's true
Celebrating a birthday for you.
Birthday cakes, all sorts of things
Yes, you're seventeen!
Seventeen, so pretty and bright.
Seventeen, a young lady, alright.
Seventeen, and women hood together.
Seventeen, not much older but better.
Want be long till you leave the nest
like your brother and sister, I guess.
You'll face the big bad world
My youngest, pretty little girl.
Happy Birthday!
You're seventeen
luv,
yo momma
© Emy Star
01 Sept 2003
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-02-17 17:32:51]
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Re: SEVENTEEN
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 05:41:44 PM AEST
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| What an awesome mom you are! Say a big happy birthday to your baby from all of us!! Wonderful poem, loved every word.... Kie |
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Re: SEVENTEEN
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:47:00 PM AEST
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wonderful...i hope she had a joyfilled birthday
Shari |
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Re: SEVENTEEN
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:40:13 PM AEST
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| Nice write for your daughter, my daughter is 14. Keep them coming ok. bye Wes... Read one of mine if you like. |
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Re: SEVENTEEN
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:31:16 PM AEST
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| My daughters are all grown now but it brings a tear of joy to my in remembering...Beautifully done.--Russ |
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Re: SEVENTEEN
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 03:58:39 AM AEST
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ONCE AGAIN,YOU HAVE A GREAT DAUGHTER & SHE HAS A GREAT MOTHER!
SWEET POEM FOR HER BIRTHDAY!! TAKE
CARE!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: SEVENTEEN
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 07:03:20 AM AEST
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| lovely mom..best wishes to your dear young lady..:o) venkat |
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Re: SEVENTEEN
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 07:53:04 AM AEST
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What a lovely poem for your daughter, mine's only 9 and I want her to stay that way, must be quite hard seeing them grow into young women and learning to let go a bit? I don't know how I'll cope. You're obviously still very close to her, it shows in your words, well done.
Ali xx |
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