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whereby loves garden
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 05:26:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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love let me drown within his eyes,
amidst sweet promise for someday's lies,
now love and i are gone separate ways,
i wish i could just fade away,
he loved me forever and ever,
different opinion love couldn't weather,
a vision of happy my mind had held,
love was the place this soul had dwelled,
i'd once left love along the lane,
but he came back around again,
then love called me his ladylove,
we two happy mooshing turtledoves,
loves arms held me through long nights,
softly whispering, 'i know its right',
now love does not show his face,
whereby loves garden's in disgrace,
so now i sit, this heart in pieces,
it loved deeply but now love ceases,
for silently spoken fare thee well byes,
this life no longer of blue skies,
no more love words gracing dreams,
i return to solitudes requiem,
far too proud to beg, cry and plead,
eau de vie is what i need,
loves left my world and set me free,
now there is nothing left of me,
this heart no love to call its own,
it does me no kindness to bemoan,
the beautiful rose of love once worn,
forlornly sits and is but thorns,
bury my soul in the deepest sea,
for i've no more happy poetry.
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 05:46:56 PM AEST
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| I could feel you hurting in this poem Nessa. If I can help you in any way please let me know. So sad but a beautifully written poem... Kie |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:21:08 PM AEST
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| it's amazing that such deep pain could be expressed with such eloquence and beauty. Wonderful. |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:49:48 PM AEST
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tears i cry for you my friend
but please don't think this the end
for as loves garden grows
another gardens flowers for you who knows
you know where to reach me
Shari |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:14:25 PM AEST
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| Hi dear Lady Fawn its been awhile. Can I help in anyway I'm glad to see you drop me a line ok. oh I have some new ones if your interested. take care Wesley Willis |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:00:01 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa hugs for you my friend this is so touching and beautiful but behind it I feel your sadness if you need to pm me Im always here for you!!!
michelle |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Yodo on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:12:01 PM AEST
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| awwwww. |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:23:03 PM AEST
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| Profoundly sad poem maam. I know not the nature of your loss but I feel it.-Godbless---Russ- |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 12:25:39 AM AEST
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Nessa, this is very disturbing that you are so unhappy. From the pain it came this beauty, so not all is dead in the garden. In time, beauty will grow again. I wish you love and happiness.
Rainbows to you,
Rita |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 07:59:06 AM AEST
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Hi Nessa, are you ok? It sounds to me that you are hurting a lot at the moment, you know I'm here to listen if you want me. The poem was beautiful and I'm sure you can feel happy again, we'll all help you won't we guys?
All my love and deepest respect,
Ali xx |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 10:18:11 AM AEST
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(((((nessa))))).....this is so sad yet so beautifully written. You are loved by so many and as long as I am around you are never alone.
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:05:00 AM AEST
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| ((((Nessa))))) ... damn the man ... but let your beautiful poetry grace these pages ... you are always amongst friends here ... hugs Jan |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:04:43 AM AEST
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I don't know what to say except I ***** loved this. Great poem...
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Merry on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:18:11 PM AEST
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this is one of the saddest and most heartfelt poems I have ever read. I know how painful it must have been to write these words, so very very sad.
Sometimes love seems like such a fleeting thing and we are so deeply hurt when it is gone.
hugs
daisy*merry |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 08:09:28 PM AEST
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O how sad. No more happy poetry. I love this poem though. Even though its soo tragic. beautiful. The words flow so gracefully.
love
~Soulless~ |
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Re: whereby loves garden
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:07:19 PM AEST
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| Nessa, you put such beautiful words to pen. Such an emotional write. I love reading your work my dear friend. *S* Cynthia |
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