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not tomorrow, but today.
Contributed by
SAT
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 03:53:45 PM in AEST
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his words so tender
his voice so dear
i dont want to love him
for that is what i fear
if i do fall in love
head over heels
he will first know
how i feel
so i write this poem
to let him know
that the last thing ill do
is let him go
competition there may be
but only one can succeed
its going to be me
for i do not want
but need
he makes me nervous
just looking his way
i want him back
not tomorrow,
But Today.
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-02-17 15:53:45]
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Re: not tomorrow, but today.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 04:57:20 PM AEST
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| This is really good! I wish that I had the confidence to go after something with that kind of faith and love. Keep it up! |
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Re: not tomorrow, but today.
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by arden on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 04:57:42 PM AEST
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very nice. good write!
Arden |
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Re: not tomorrow, but today.
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:23:23 PM AEST
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THAT SOUNDED SO SWEET,& PAINTS A GREAT PICTURE TO GO ALONG WITH IT!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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