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My Demon Unleashed
Contributed by
James_Forest
on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 02:35:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Quit messing with me
I won't warn you again
If you don't stop this crap
You'll wind up dead
My demon inside
Loves to kill
I can control his power
But I can also let him go
You don't want to see
My demon unleashed
His power is focused
Much beyond all belief
He'll rip you apart
He'll tear you to shreds
You're making him mad
And he wants to kill again
You still havent stopped
With this torturous game
Now my demon will be unleashed
Today it's you he'll maim
But you should feel honored
For I rarely let him go
Not many get to meet him
I think I'll tell him to kill you slow
Copyright ©
James_Forest
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2004-02-17 14:35:49]
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Re: My Demon Unleashed
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by SAT on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 03:56:31 PM AEST
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| i love it. its very and it speaks out. It sounds like one of my poems... its not on here yet, but ill get it on ASAP! keep on striving for the top! :D |
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Re: My Demon Unleashed
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 05:19:44 PM AEST
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this is a great write!! i really enjoyed reading it .. It reminds me of a short story i wrote about an angel and demon falling in love.. Awesome job!!!
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Re: My Demon Unleashed
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:28:50 AM AEST
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this was sweet I can relate to having a demon inside. Its scary and hard to control at times. I hope u can curb it by writing poetry.
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