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Seeing Her Blue
Contributed by
misheleluv
on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:25:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The light shone her eyes
Uncovered the blue
A blue she had never portrayed…
So silent fell a single tear
A life that was shattered
Torn and betrayed…
Her softness then embraces me
Searching my heart
Longing just…
No words she speaks ~ relying on me
So comfort her
I must…
The blueness fades
Grows dusty now
Questions fill her eyes…
Gently closing
Slumber comes
She sleeps away the lies…
I leave her then
Like always again
Releasing her from my grasp…
Closing the door
Destroying her hopes
Killing her perhaps…
Tomorrow ~ I will kill her again
And yet
She will receive…
Her eyes once more ~ shall cry for me
And yet
I still deceive…
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misheleluv
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2004-02-17 11:25:03]
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Re: Seeing Her Blue
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 12:01:37 PM AEST
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| Wow! this is very well done! Keep them coming hun! |
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Re: Seeing Her Blue
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by CarrieLynn on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 03:39:49 PM AEST
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| aww thats sad but cute all in the same... i like how the last word rymes... |
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Re: Seeing Her Blue
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by Asatru on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 04:47:42 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem, but why are you doing this to her? I don't mean to make you feel bad, but I was just curious. |
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