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Evoultion
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:20:44 AM in AEST
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Falling backwards through our times,
Our lost evolution hidden,
By all our faceless crimes,
In a world so evil and ridden,
Of love and meaningful lies
In which we forget our past ties
We say were the leaders of this world,
Relying on bacteria and worms,
To satisfy every idea we've held,
Unto which our children learn,
To be all humanitiarian supremacists
And then become true nationlists
This is our evolution,
This is not the solution,
This is our absolution,
To dig our own graves
We build societies to dictate our lives,
We follow faiths with no face,
Listen to politicians and all there lies,
Science is a cult and not a race,
Because out lives are based theory
The futures gonna look a little dreary
We just sheep following the herd,
Of a cliff onto jaggered rocks,
Which the 'smart' ones pefer,
Lifes is full of lies and knocks,
A never ending road to no-where,
Where nothings ever fare
This is our evolution,
This is not the solution,
This is our absolution,
To dig our own graves
We think we can cure all disease,
Break the rules that nature intended,
Just so that we can please,
The martyrs of science we defended,
So that we can over-populate,
So that we can aggitate
The rest of life
Were on a road to self destruction,
Caused by our over-bearing egotism,
And our ability of construction,
Were trapped in a schism,
The truth is far to real,
Know this when our skin rots and peels,
When die
This is our evolution,
This is not the solution,
Our minds bring confusion,
No unity, no fusion,
Lies based on segredation,
Following this useless nation,
Were heading towards damnation,
This is our evoltion,
This is our absolution,
This is the end of the line,
When we realize were wrong
And nothings ever fine
Because we are human
And we are what we are
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-02-17 11:20:44]
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Re: Evoultion
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:53:42 AM AEST
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Reminds me a bit of Lionel's last poem. Do you write music? These would make great lyrics.
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Re: Evoultion
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 12:20:21 PM AEST
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| a very insightful beautiifully expressed poem to be sure:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Evoultion
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by Lionel on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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Well, Al, you've got basic human depravity (since the fall of Adam) pretty well summed up. A very good read. Adams sin imputed to mankind, (like begets like) is exemplified in the fact that man can be much more evil than any other creature: but yet, more noble too.
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Re: Evoultion
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 01:38:22 PM AEST
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well i like it alot
to quote you
we are what we are
and you are a decent writer
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Re: Evoultion
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by kayald on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:10:46 PM AEST
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| This is one butt kicking poem....it really sums up how i feel sometimes, like its all just one big accident that we're here and for some reason we spend most of our lives trying to prove that it's no accident...that fate is real or something, anyway, i get it |
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Re: Evoultion
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 05:12:53 AM AEST
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| I love this... such blaring truth, great level of creativity, and wonderful flow. You were right, we do have much in conmon. I'll definately be reading more of your work. Hope you check out my new posts too! see ya around... jason |
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