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uncanny feel
Contributed by
bhavnas
on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:55:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Stormy night , dark sky
Forbidden paths , nowhere to go.
Restlessness within , blankness without,
Thither sadness , hither cloud.
Treading along life’s road ,
I stop ,I reflect for awhile.
Tired , grumpy is what I contain ,
No balance or serenity to maintain.
I guff , I guffaw
My shallowness I don’t comprehend somehow.
Din around but silence within ,
Drooping I sit and gape holding my gin.
Was it pride?was it greed?
To my downfall how did I speed?
Maddening rush , deafening sound
Made up faces all around.
You I believe or him I disown ,
He is other but you were my own .
Helplessly I try to stand ,yet I drown
There is sunshine yet in darkness I am found.
Copyright ©
bhavnas
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2004-02-17 09:55:28]
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Re: uncanny feel
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 01:54:17 PM AEST
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| very refreshing write, this is why i moved to the country lol, but i reminese about my life in the city... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: uncanny feel
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:49:35 PM AEST
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I can relate so well to this piece. My 30 year career left me with no time to go inside and find myself. No peace, no serenity. As soon as I retired I moved out to the country and life is now so beautiful and serene. I can actually enjoy each day and not ever look at a clock. Yes, we do get too caught up in our lives sometimes to really live and capture life.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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Re: uncanny feel
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:57:11 AM AEST
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| Welldone my friend..there is nice effect in the poem.. venkat |
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