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A good Freind
Contributed by
Dizza_13
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 05:48:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You have always been a good freind to me
We have always been true to our word
And as we grow up and futher apart
it is although we come back stronger
As we go on through our lives I will always be there for you as you did to me
You stuck with me even when things were tough
You stood up for me when i would not
And you helped me when i could not
Our freindship continues stronger than ever
To remain freinds for ever and ever...........
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
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2004-02-17 05:48:04]
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Re: A good Freind
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:25:59 AM AEST
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Nice friendship poem..welcome to y.p.d.c
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Re: A good Freind
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:19:56 AM AEST
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Very nice write here
I hope you keep sending them in.
see a few of mine.
bye Wes... |
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Re: A good Freind
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:21:26 AM AEST
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| This was a nice friendship poem. It made me smile! I thought you did a fine job. If you fixed your spelling errors it would be absolutely perfect. Hey *Welcome* to ypdc...Kie |
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Re: A good Freind
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:26:25 AM AEST
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sorry guys about spelling errors i have corrected them in a new poem under the same name exept it has (fixed spelling sorry about that) on it plz read and enjoy.
P.S
Thanks for the comments it's nice to get feedback |
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Re: A good Freind
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:53:53 AM AEST
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Hey Diz,
good poem, i know your good cos i have read heaps of your stuff. Stay strong and being happy isnt boring!!!
Loz |
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