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I Care
Contributed by
Remi
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 02:49:55 AM in AEST
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I care
Feb 12, 04
8:37 pm
finsh at 11:34 pm
I know the words that comes out my mouth sound careless but when I speak I never wanted my words to hurt I never meant for them to be a knife to u but your comfort
U don't notice now but I care
I care about your feelin, heart, mind and soul
I can't explain you but I know I care about u I know I want u in my heart and life I want u to see the inside of me
U don't notice now but I care I can't or don't know how to show it but I do
The day I hear your voice I care the first day I saw your picture I care
Cause u so blind by your false thoughts of me, u don't see
U don't notice that u are the first man that I want to give my, heart, soul, and body to
So I care when I talk to u even a fraction of a second time stop my time stop. Their shouldn't be any reasonable doubts
U need to stop playin the blind man games because I care
I care so much it hurt me more then poundin knife at my heart
I care
I always did
I care so much that it killing me
I care
I care
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Remi
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2004-02-17 02:49:55]
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Re: I Care
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 03:38:40 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifull!
good write!
luv, huggs,
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Re: I Care
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:21:44 AM AEST
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caring hurts, doesn't it? I enjoyed the poetry...I hope when Spring comes, happiness will bloom like new buds on a tree, and hurt fall away like dead leaves...
a_bear
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Re: I Care
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by fldadn1 on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:24:59 AM AEST
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| Don't forget to care for yourself ive made that mistake and it still hurts till this day. Well good write though. |
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