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Who Was to Know

Contributed by poetic_angel on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 02:31:18 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I met you once, and a year later we met again
Who was to know that six months later it’d be the end
When we weren’t together, how I’d feel so sad
But when you’d have me in your arms, how I’d feel so bad
“Cause when we weren’t together, many negative thoughts ran through my head
You made me feel so safe and secure, only good thoughts I thought of instead
The way we talked about the future, I was so certain we would last
I would’ve never imagined that we would be the past
You knew how strong I felt for you, how could u hurt me like that
How could you make me hope for the best when you knew it wasn’t a fact
It wasn’t long, before you let me fall off cloud nine
After that conversation, I knew I wasn’t fine
I knew for a long time I would cry myself to sleep
And I knew for so many days I would sit here and weap
For you, I put my pride aside for you
I swore that I’d stay no matter what u put me through
And you, you said you’d never leave me
So now I look at this break up like it really can’t be
And you say that the future, I can’t look forward to
If you have feelings for me so much, how could you put me through
This pain, it feels like you just threw me away
Why would you do that? You knew I’d always stay
Then you said you love me is that really true
Well, I wanted to tell you, that I love you too
I swear I do
I never knew
That I care for you so much it was love in my heart
And that’s why I’m in tears you really tore me apart
Even when you said to the navy you were headed
I would’ve waited six years for you,, in my head, that thought was embedded
I couldn’t imagine leaving you; I gave you so much of me
Don’t you remember those memories we had, man, can’t you see
That if you really cared, you would never leave
You would never unintentionally put yourself to deceive
I know that you said this decision was for the better
But the more those words run through my head, the more my tears get wetter
It hasn’t even been long, didn’t u want to give us a chance
Going through bad times together could’ve only enhanced
What we had, what we felt for another
You were more than just a friend, more than just a lover
You were, you are one of the most special people in my heart
Who was to know that after everything you said, you were the one to depart




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Re: Who Was to Know (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 02:33:39 AM AEST
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Hits a little close to home, but mine had a good ending, and I hope your's does as well.


Re: Who Was to Know (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:59:08 AM AEST
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Ouch. I know how much that feeling stings, and hopefully the clouds will break and let the shine return.

Thank you for sharing this poem. I liked it a lot, and found it very relatable.

Truly,
-V.S.




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