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Contributed by
sidra
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Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 10:10:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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woman needs to hear "I love you".
Even when she knows it's true.
It doesn't mean she can't believe.
Or that shes afraid you'll leave.
The words are sweet beyond compare.
When hugs and kisses can't be shared.
They fill the empty spaces where,
You would be if you could be there.
It needn't be said at every minute.
As long as it comes with your heart in it .
When for so long it comes with ease.
Then it slows and later is ceased...
The empty spaces begin to spread.
Wider and deeper, filled with dread.
When a woman is battling insecurity and doubt.
It hurts so much to go totally without.
What once was given everyday,its value not fully seen.
Now means so much she cannot say, she longs for what has been.
She never dreamed it would get this way.
The need so strong that she would pay.
With her heart and all she will ever possess
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sidra
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2004-02-16 22:10:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: please comment
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:28:28 PM AEST (User
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Sounds like this is written in something like 3rd person, thanks for the tips on women though!
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