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Yesterday's Pain
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:10:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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she stands at the window
cheek pressed to the pane
while the last trace of summer
becomes drenched in the rain
her eyes are set in a ghastly stare
while the day wears on but
she doesn't care
there is work to be done
which she hasn't begun
so she takes a deep breath
then begins to hum
slowly the evening arrives
and trying hard not
to cry she sighs
wishing that she weren't alive
she knows tomrrow
will be the same for all
she can feel is yesterday's pain
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faithmairee
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2004-02-16 20:10:35]
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Re: Yesterday's Pain
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:34:06 PM AEST
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| Wow, that is gripping. very nicly done. |
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Re: Yesterday's Pain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:40:37 PM AEST
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Really touching write..... full of emotion...
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Re: Yesterday's Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:51:02 PM AEST
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this was beautiful... I can relate quite a bit.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Yesterday's Pain
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:51:06 PM AEST
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this was very emotional and sad..i really like it
luv always |
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Re: Yesterday's Pain
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by nightrider on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:53:44 PM AEST
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| stunningly simple, yet so easy to understand. i relate to this, and i applaude your choice of words. |
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Re: Yesterday's Pain
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by Kie on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:43:27 PM AEST
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| So sad and remarkably written. Kie |
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Re: Yesterday's Pain
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:24:46 AM AEST
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| Remarkable. I truly can relate. |
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