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The One That Got Away
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:25:28 PM in AEST
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I loved the sadly taipered moments.
I loved the way you gazed at me.
I loved the dark and blissful journey.
I loved the comfort of your touch.
I loved the most romantic night of my life.
And you were the reason I loved it.
I didn't see how much you meant to me.
I didn't understand that I need you.
I didn't know then that it was perfect.
I didn't realize that it was all so simple.
I didn't listen to my heart.
And now I hear it louder than ever.
I was absorbed in being a social butterfly.
I was conceited and caught up in vanity.
I was inconsiderate, heartless and selfish.
I was wrong when I took you for granted.
I was foolish to let us slip away so fast.
And now I am so sorry.
I could still be holding your hand.
I could look into your eyes.
I could taste your perfect kiss.
I could still stand by your side.
I could have had something with you.
But could have means in the past.
I am usually clear minded.
I am normally at ease.
I am petrified that you'll no longer want me.
I am so worried you'll never come back.
I am fond of butterflies.
But not when they churn inside my stomach.
I have you on my mind.
I have obvious and deep regret.
I have dreams about you still.
I have my priorities straight now.
I have a place in my heart for you and you alone.
But will I ever have you again?
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Re: The One That Got Away
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by Kie on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 10:07:03 PM AEST
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| This brought tears to my eyes. I certainly could relate. Thank you so much for sharing this. Kie |
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Re: The One That Got Away
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 06:11:28 PM AEST
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packed full of feeling, very well written, loved all the self analysis showed how much you put into this superb.
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Re: The One That Got Away
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:26:43 PM AEST
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| Very good! This piece has more substance than most poems I've read. I can completely relate too. Keep it up! |
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Re: The One That Got Away
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 02:32:00 AM AEST
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Very well written. It well describes love that has passed. In deep regret I think I stand in the same side of the river as you. But I hope not.
Take care, my friend.
David |
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Re: The One That Got Away
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:27:58 PM AEST
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| Ive waited for years to get a letter or hear "her" say this to me..... but I dont think she will, I can relate alot with this. a very touching write. makes me think..... A++++ |
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