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goodbye
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:14:16 PM in AEST
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I believe it's time I said goodbye,
to all the tears and all the lies,
I think it's time to dry my eye's,
say goodbye to the reasons that I cry.
It's time to wave the hate goodbye,
time to live, not to die,
time to lose the hate and lies,
I know it's time to say goodbye.
so here's to you...
goodbye....
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2004-02-16 18:14:16]
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Re: goodbye
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by viki on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:30:29 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem. Makes me think of starting over. Changing your ways. I can relate. |
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Re: goodbye
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by nightrider on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:56:51 PM AEST
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| ive been thinking the same thing... although, for me, its time to reconsider that thought. |
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Re: goodbye
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:09:26 PM AEST
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this is an emotional wirte,,u r very strong...good work
luv always |
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Re: goodbye
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by LiveTheDream on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:00:41 AM AEST
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Most definatley sweetie u have to say goodbye! Glad u did and really liked the poem it may be short but it doesnt mean it aint good cos it is!!!
Luv nat xxx |
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Re: goodbye
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by antares on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:45:31 PM AEST
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| very inspirational to my situation. i am trying to find the strenght to do just that. hope i can. great poem!~antares |
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Re: goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2010 @ 01:13:17 AM AEST
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| Simply perfect and perfectly simple...yet greatly said. |
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