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Tic-Tac
Contributed by
poetess730
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Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 06:41:27 AM in AEST
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Did you ever have someone
blow their breath in your face?
With breath so bad you could
probably smell if from outer space?
I'm not trying to be rude,
Not even mean...
Have a tic-tac,
Have an altoid...
Drink some LISTERINE!!
Walking around huffing and puffin,
Don't they smell their own breath??
Practically knocking people out
with that putrid smell of death.
How can they not smell it?
It's right under their nose.
It doesn't smell very nice,
They should keep their mouth closed.
To rid that awful stench
Everyone offers them a mint,
Don't they smell it too?
Don't they get the hint?
I know this is not very nice
but neither is that smell...
please do something about it
before you make someone ill.
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Re: Tic-Tac
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by Suzy on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 04:10:49 PM AEST
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LOL....don't you find it hard to just come out and tell someone their breath stinks?....hehe maybe we should all get some cajones and tell em' spare someone else having to smell it....lol...
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Re: Tic-Tac
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 12:05:12 AM AEST
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I dont find it overly hard to tell someone there breath stinks, then again, I am a straight forward person. Just say, hey buddy your breath stinks.
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