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for your play
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:59:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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thoughts of how it could have been,
lost against your lying ways,
losing thoughts of happiness,
crying out into the sky,
my heart being broken once again,
my feelings a toy just for your play,
being betrayed by sometihing so new,
heart hurt again, feelings made blue.
i never thought i'd trust again,
after all the stuff ive been through,
but when i thought i liked you,
that was the only thing i knew,
but now i see its nothing,
i really was nothing to you,
i'll never let my feelings,
show through again to you
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Re: for your play
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by Stitch on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 10:05:27 AM AEST
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You certainly strike a universal chord with women. How well we know this misery.
Nice work.
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Re: for your play
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 11:32:43 AM AEST
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| True, there are jerks out there that toy with women's feelings, but there are also good men out there. Don't give up. |
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Re: for your play
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 11:37:04 AM AEST
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| to anonymous: im sure there are, im just afraid of being hurt again, too many jerks. i just want for once to get the one without jerklike tendancies.... |
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Re: for your play
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 11:41:41 AM AEST
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Qote from an English girls school song.........
Boys boys, big posers all
graffitti atitudes, straight off the wall
From when they're eleven
to aged twentyseven
their idea of heaven
is kicking a ball
Try another of my poems .......He's not the only one Page 2 of my list) it might give you a bit of comfort.
bob |
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Re: for your play
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:27:08 PM AEST
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Wow, what a beautiful poem, this calls out to everyone that has ever been hurt, so many men are so childish, jerks, up their own.. never give consideration for other people feelings, because they never grow up, alot coming from me im part of their cult their way of life, cause im a guy too so according to all women i inherit all their quailities, and hell ive been told it so much men are jerks men are bad, always cheating etc i guess i believe it now so i cant feel what you say in this write because i agree with what your saying, from the heart which is the truest form of poetry, and on behalf of the entity that is man, i apologise from deep within because were all CU...S at the end of the day
Keep it up head and writes
Luke xx |
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Re: for your play
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:28:23 PM AEST
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| thats can feel lol not cant :) |
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Re: for your play
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by antares on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:50:08 PM AEST
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| once again, i love ur poem! perfect timing for me. and once again great poem.~antares |
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