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Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:32:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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the pure sound of your laughter,
set my heart on fire.
keep laughing baby you fill me with desire.
first there is smoke,then there is fire.
our fire burns when love is strong between each other.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-02-16 08:32:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: LISTEN:
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 10:06:51 AM AEST (User
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I love how concise this is. You have said so much with so few words.
Nice.
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Re: LISTEN:
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stalkee on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:34:39 PM AEST (User
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wow, great poem....sometimes its short poems that say so many things |
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