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Chocolate
Contributed by
redwest802
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Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:25:41 AM in AEST
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Your smooth embrace
Tantalizes my tongue as
My heat melts you.
Slowly I feel you slide across my tongue.
Your creamy sweet essence flows down my throat,
Caressing my taste buds with your power.
You hold me with your sweetness.
I can’t survive without you,
My piece of Milk Chocolate.
Copyright ©
redwest802
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2004-02-16 06:25:41]
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Re: Chocolate
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by Dawny on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:37:12 AM AEST
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This does not help my diet lol
Really good poem, I love the descriptions..well done
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Chocolate
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by Joan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:41:30 PM AEST
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| beautiful...I can taste the richness and sweetness right from your words... |
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Re: Chocolate
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by bttrflynajar on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:09:48 PM AEST
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| im lovin that poem... nice work... you describe the love so well |
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