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Little Eyes
Contributed by
morgana1
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Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 02:34:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You wake up in the morning and their
they are, they watch you get ready for
work, and follow you to your car.
They never rest they are always watching
you, so be careful of the things you do.
Their they are, watching you when you
come home from work, they dont no
how your day was, they just see you acting
like a jerk.
They see the good things and the bad,
it breaks your heart to see them sad.
They see you when your happy and mad,
so try and be happy so those little eyes
will never be sad.
Copyright ©
morgana1
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2004-02-16 02:34:51]
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Re: Little Eyes
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 03:34:41 AM AEST
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Well written..your poem is well wrapped " try and be happy so those little eyes will never be sad"...good suggestion every body when they return after work..good luck..keep them coming on.. venkat
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Re: Little Eyes
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:41:18 PM AEST
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wonderful write morgan...just beautiful
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