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Lost Inside of Me
Contributed by
harshreality
on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:13:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Can't stop these tears -
From streaming down my face;
Can't change the fact,
That in your world......
I have no place.
I'm falling apart -
There are no words to be found......
No way to make you realize;
A breaking heart makes no sound -
Love this deep you just can't verbalize.
I tried to show you.......
So many times;
But you've never looked -
Deep enough to see,
And so these feelings remain......
Lost inside of me.
The tears that fall from my eyes -
Are nothing, but liquid to you;
You'll never see whats really there....
All my love,
Covered in so much hurt and confusion;
All I could ever dream of.....
Ending over and over again;
Its more than anyone can bare.
Copyright ©
harshreality
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2004-02-16 00:13:25]
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Re: Lost Inside of Me
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by michelle on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:22:31 AM AEST
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| i like ur poem and the meaning that you set out |
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Re: Lost Inside of Me
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by Chadene_Gillespie on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:25:20 AM AEST
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beautiful display of emotion...i love this line "A breaking heart makes no sound -"
great write
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Re: Lost Inside of Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:24:34 AM AEST
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this is a awesome write and i can understand what you are feeling... Don't waste your tears any longer on this person.. you can find better.. great job on the poem though I really liked it
PEace
JENNA |
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Re: Lost Inside of Me
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by Dawny on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:42:27 AM AEST
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Very deep and emotional..awesome write
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Lost Inside of Me
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:53:24 PM AEST
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I love yer poems...
A breaking heart makes no sound -
that line wow was just so deep. I hope u feel better soon... I really mean that of course depression and heart-break make for the best poems usually.
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Re: Lost Inside of Me
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:11:07 PM AEST
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so so true
so so me
im lost and confused too |
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