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FORGIVE ME?
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:36:46 PM in AEST
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If I care too much
and shower you with luv-
fret when your body's ill
hoping, praying, never giving up.
It's just my nature
so please forgive me
if I shower
your tender heart,
forgive me.
If I get carryed away
mezmerized with your heart,
embaress your ego
with cupids dart.
If I charm you
with my honest soul,
treat you in nothing but luv,
forgive as it's
all I know.
© Emy Star
30 Jun 2003
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-02-15 23:36:46]
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:06:38 AM AEST
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| In your words are found<br />
The beauty of a compassionate heart<br />
Tender and wise<br />
With wisdom to impart<br />
<br />
May God forgive us all<br />
It we have not the grace<br />
We find in the heart<br />
At Emmy Stars place !<br />
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Excellent work emmy !---Russ<br />
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:57:48 AM AEST
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I don't think I know a single man that would not love that treatment. This is sweet, Emy. Good write.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:59:17 AM AEST
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NOW AREN'T YOU AN ANGEL SO SWEET
FROM HEARTBEAT TO HEARTBEAT! YOU IS
A VERY CARING GIRL WITH ALOT OF LOVE FOR THE WORLD!! BY THE WAY,YOUR POEM WAS FANTASTIC!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:12:06 AM AEST
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Wow..beautiful poem..very sweet.
thanks for sharing this Emy..luv and hugs... venkat |
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:26:07 AM AEST
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awesome write emy as always !! i really like your work !!
Peace
Jenna |
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 02:29:48 AM AEST
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Aww...what a touching write. Good job here emy.
~blueheart |
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:04:55 AM AEST
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Personally, I think any man who received that deep of love would be a fool to take it for granted. Nice write, Emy. I like this one a lot!
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:29:47 AM AEST
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Awesome write... fantastic job, Emmm
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: FORGIVE ME?
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by Dawny on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:44:38 AM AEST
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Awwhhh...This is so loving and sweet. I love your style
Love Dawny x |
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