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COUNTERFIT LUV
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:20:30 PM in AEST
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Luv's the stongest words
but readily abused.
Luv can reach variable heights
but luv doesn't leave you
alone nite after nite.
Counterfit luv will
promise u the moon
but never gives luv
chance 2 bloom.
Counterfit luv's there
just in time for payday
counterfit luv never stays!
True luv only grows
stronger, day by day.
U don't gotta
beg it 2 stay.
So babe, just
tell um
stick it where sun don't shine.
Take my heart,
it's thine.
Life's too short we know
U gotta grab luv
take hold.
Why long for a
maybe someday
When u can come
2 my house 2 stay?
© Emy Star
12 Aug 2003
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2004-02-15 23:20:30]
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Re: COUNTERFIT LUV
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:40:48 PM AEST
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| Yes life is to short and true luv is elusive and your star shines the brightest in the sky....... |
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Re: COUNTERFIT LUV
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by Chadene_Gillespie on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:29:54 AM AEST
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| i've dealt with conterfit love a million and one times...great write |
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Re: COUNTERFIT LUV
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:08:20 AM AEST
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THE LOVE YOU MAKE IS TO BE TRUE & NOT FAKE! TELL EM' DON'T EVEN BOTHER TO PHONE ME,CAUSE YOU'LL END UP SO
LONELY!! YOU WANT SOMETHING THAT FEELS SO REAL,& NOT SO PHONY!!! I LOVED THAT POEM-IT RULES!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: COUNTERFIT LUV
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 03:06:36 AM AEST
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| yea..true love only grows stronger..good poem ..venkat |
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Re: COUNTERFIT LUV
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:24:49 AM AEST
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Awesome write, hun... I loved the title as wellas the poem...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: COUNTERFIT LUV
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by Lionel on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:00:22 PM AEST
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If I wasn't already taken, I'd be looking for you.
With affection, Lionel |
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