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Sunlit
Contributed by
Jennifer_Gene_Choate
on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 08:59:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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An image of you,
yellow…
sunlit and full of bloom.
Melancholy in your image,
reminded of careless adventures,
heartfelt and full of song.
Gazing out the window…
willows sweeping the ground,
weeping over my ordinary heart.
Sweet and delicate kisses fill my daydreams.
A mosaic of soft, sensual thoughts fills my slumber.
I sigh…
at the absence of such things.
Forlorn in the ghost of memories,
yet to be made.
Saddened by the reality of oneness,
yet addicted to the desire of what could be.
Longing for what cannot be made real.
If only…
you were near.
Copyright ©
Jennifer_Gene_Choate
... [
2002-09-07 20:59:36]
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Re: Sunlit
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 12:47:03 AM AEST
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| Can't help but feel this is for an internet love. I could be wrong. It's quite good though and I enjoyed reading it |
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Re: Sunlit
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by LJ on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 06:34:00 AM AEST
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| I too get the feeling that this may be an internet love!? Nice write |
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Re: Sunlit
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 10:04:21 AM AEST
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Beautiful write Jennifer!!!
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