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I Need a Fix
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:25:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My heart is racing
I need a fix!
My hands are shaking
I need a fix!
I can't think straight
I need a fix!
The butterflies awake
I need a fix!
My breathing is erratic
I need a fix!
Am I an addict?
I need a fix!
I miss it so much
I need a fix!
Your sound, your smell, your touch
I need a fix!!
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ToriVeigh
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2004-02-15 21:25:02]
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Re: I Need a Fix
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:41:44 PM AEST
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| AH,THAT SOUNDS PRETTY WILD-BUT I LOVED IT! NICE WRITE!!<br />
DAN!!! |
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Re: I Need a Fix
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by Kie on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:55:35 PM AEST
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| Oh do I need a fix!! Fantastic and kept me guessing till the very end where this one was going. Kie |
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Re: I Need a Fix
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by Pasta on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:23:56 PM AEST
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| Great write, people are going to think we are both bi-polar. I'll be back soon to get my fix of you. |
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Re: I Need a Fix
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by Dri on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:05:57 PM AEST
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| i know how you feel... this is a pretty good write, but "i need a fix" every other line seemed a bit much. just a thought |
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