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Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:48:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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.:*Mirror*:.
The definition of despair
(if you belong to the female species)
.:*Mirror*:.
The confirmation
that you're not the way you should be
.:*Mirror*:. Mirror,
On the wall, says:
'No way are YOU the fairest of them all'
.:*Mirror*:.
Change your pose
To make it better
.:*Mirror*:.
It doesn't help, does it?
Maybe the blade
will solve it?
One way or the other
Wounds
will satisfy you...
...for a while
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-02-15 17:48:01]
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Re: mirror
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:55:45 PM AEST
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| its written in a nice, east to read way,a nd you convey everything you say, with such amazing emotions |
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Re: mirror
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by Lionel on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 07:03:40 PM AEST
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| Very good. One thing - I would change the word "should " to " want to." You are the way you should be and I think you are fine. Intelligent with a great sense of humor. Thank God for those gifts. |
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Re: mirror
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by dolly_dagger on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:05:48 AM AEST
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| thank you alec and lionel. you must understand that this poem does not reflect me particularly. i am confident about the way i look and there is nothing i would change. but all the girls around me have this stereotype thing going on about what they think they should be. i used the word 'should' to convey more of a force, the pressure of society taking over the girls' real opinions. |
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Re: mirror
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:46:57 PM AEST
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Sad, but truthfully written.
Expounded with grace and precision.
Fine work. |
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