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Beyond dreams
Contributed by
AliB
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:44:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The radiant sun shines above
And breathes life into everything it touches
This heart has been warmed by my beloved
Special memories still so clear
A songbird whispers in my ear
Reminding me of promises so true
Within the skies of azure blue
The stars now twinkling in the night
Watch over the lost and lonely
Guiding them through
Showing them the way
The way to our hearts where they will be safe
With guidance and understanding
They will be victorious
They will be free
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AliB
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2004-02-15 17:44:23]
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Re: Beyond dreams
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:06:34 AM AEST
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Well done this was beautiful!
Dreams go way beyond! Christina |
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Re: Beyond dreams
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:19:58 PM AEST
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Well it's beautifull and both of ya did a great job!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Beyond dreams
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:35:37 PM AEST
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Very good!
Beautifull!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Beyond dreams
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by Dawny on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:58:31 AM AEST
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ooohhh I really like this. Its so descriptive, I can really see the twinkling stars and hear the whispering songbird.
Well done Ali, Brilliant writing as always
Love Dawny xx |
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