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Universe of walls
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 04:40:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A flow
drops
D
E
E
P
into my mind
as reality
dissipates like a mist.....
at a crossroad
in the life
and everything seems so transparent
mirrors reflecting changes
and my emotions
are released on pages.
Silently
I am overwhelmed
so out of focus
don't want anyone around,
staying awake all night
moaning softly
wondering
what should I do now.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-02-15 16:40:18]
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Re: Universe of walls
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 06:43:50 PM AEST
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| An interesting write ... the last part I can relate to so well ... thanks for sharing this one ... Jan |
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Re: Universe of walls
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:10:50 PM AEST
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| Oh this is sad but great, creative writing.<br />
luv, huggs,<br />
emy |
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